Winston Churchill was sitting at his desk, working on his epic about World War II, when his private secretary entered the room. Churchill had reached the Blitz – the German air strikes against London. His staff of researchers had earlier produced a 150-page brief on the raids. The secretary had been asked to cut it down to about two and a half pages and, after having “worked like stink,” he could now proudly hand over the condensed version.
Churchill took out his red pen and started to edit. “All my sloppy sentences were tightened up and all my useless adjectives obliterated,” the secretary tells us in a documentary made about 50 years later.
In the midst of it all, Churchill said gently, “I hope you don’t mind me doing this?” The secretary answered, “Thank you, Sir – you are giving me a free lesson in writing plain English.”
Bennet, S. 1992. Churchill [documentary]. London: British Broadcasting Corporation
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